tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post3993145532391647406..comments2023-07-22T00:17:41.729-07:00Comments on Brilliant Disguise: Chapter One: Life as she knows itSuper_Kiwihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18000771355101318462noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-61133308107425750832011-05-19T20:10:26.180-07:002011-05-19T20:10:26.180-07:00Great start Kiwi!!!! Can't wait to see where ...Great start Kiwi!!!! Can't wait to see where this story goes! :)JohnnaJovihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12883154233386320378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-14635467701783917132011-04-04T18:33:57.565-07:002011-04-04T18:33:57.565-07:00Muauauahhahahaha!
I know what's going to haaa...Muauauahhahahaha!<br /><br />I know what's going to haaaaapppen.<br />Ahem.<br />Sorry.<br />That's just crass to do.<br />hehe<br /><br />*coughs delicately*<br />Great Start Kiwi! I love that opener with the $. *rubs hands together*<br />And then the fly by night look in the shop to just poke us to life.<br /><br />Love Jonathan. I think he's going to keep her grounded just enough for a certain someone to turn her upside down and on her ass.TaraLeighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00342413692746814980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-89782238622539038752011-03-29T17:07:08.326-07:002011-03-29T17:07:08.326-07:00Yay - I'm glad you've finally posted this!...Yay - I'm glad you've finally posted this! Loving it so far. Can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Waiting impatiently for the next installment.... :-)kiwichickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13973034522806394389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-82036996312974407622011-03-29T15:47:58.079-07:002011-03-29T15:47:58.079-07:00Thank you so much guys! I was a bit nervous to let...Thank you so much guys! I was a bit nervous to let this one go out into the world but I have now and I'm glad it's started off well! hehe. I think you'll love Devon :)<br /><br />xxSuper_Kiwihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18000771355101318462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-20533319907625601682011-03-28T08:52:54.692-07:002011-03-28T08:52:54.692-07:00Fantastic start! Can't wait for the inevitable...Fantastic start! Can't wait for the inevitable meeting. <br /><br />Thank you xxBubbleSheephttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16119351575986216247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-54899129332076693712011-03-26T11:49:01.513-07:002011-03-26T11:49:01.513-07:00You've got me sucked in already! Anxiously aw...You've got me sucked in already! Anxiously awaiting Devon's secret (for a long time to come, I'm sure...lol) and wondering what kind of special services our HRH will be lining up for. ;o)<br /><br />Great start, and I can't wait to see what kind of adventure you're going to take us on this time!!blushnscarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12780956360419518153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-34229476199568017572011-03-26T03:53:59.249-07:002011-03-26T03:53:59.249-07:00Intrigued about the story from the past and the $$...Intrigued about the story from the past and the $$$. Can't wait for the Leading Man to appear! Hooked already!!!JoviKiwiGalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16259234912899882767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-65605307116148826232011-03-26T00:37:06.191-07:002011-03-26T00:37:06.191-07:00OH MY GOD! T... you better not hold us in suspense...OH MY GOD! T... you better not hold us in suspense forever with this one... I NEED the next chapter.... I'm HOOKED again! <br /><br />And how do I find this salon... oh I so need to go there!!!! :) (Sambora/Jovi Girl)Roman’s Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07056226209566651231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-34270417061028720032011-03-25T23:49:35.665-07:002011-03-25T23:49:35.665-07:00Already hooked lol. Love the way you started it :)...Already hooked lol. Love the way you started it :) Looking forward to this story! Your a terriffic writer!Kellinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-12431789979421810462011-03-25T23:05:24.535-07:002011-03-25T23:05:24.535-07:00Already very interesting. And I have to say that I...Already very interesting. And I have to say that I think Jon is gonna crash into her "perfectly" organized world - and I don't know that she will like it at first!ANNhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07258263071002332246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-48019318126442028792011-03-25T21:05:59.288-07:002011-03-25T21:05:59.288-07:00Oooh, I'm intrigued!
Recognize her? From whe...Oooh, I'm intrigued!<br /><br />Recognize her? From where? And what's the deal with the $?<br /><br />And I love the characterization even in this small bit. Can't wait to get to know Devon & Jonathan more!<br /><br />Genie PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-91177349145550367312011-03-25T19:57:39.394-07:002011-03-25T19:57:39.394-07:00A wonderful start! Can't wait for more to deve...A wonderful start! Can't wait for more to develop...joviswillowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04737797998640956836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-73961827396623601912011-03-25T19:34:24.850-07:002011-03-25T19:34:24.850-07:00OK....Why would HE recognize her?!?!?
Why is she h...OK....Why would HE recognize her?!?!?<br />Why is she hiding this much cash in her office?!?!?<br />Don't make us wait too long for the answers!!!Bayaderrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14496897037198332596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-42387816921699662832011-03-25T19:08:16.692-07:002011-03-25T19:08:16.692-07:00Hmmm...I'm a little concerned about the money....Hmmm...I'm a little concerned about the money..that's a lot to have sitting around. I'm afraid Jonathon may not be as trustworthy as she thinks.<br /><br />Eagerly waiting for HIMSELF to make an appearance in the shop. LOLnorwichlizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17091614197259764631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-534490026014195634.post-41945392562817606202011-03-25T18:47:15.016-07:002011-03-25T18:47:15.016-07:00Can't wait to see how this one plays out!!Can't wait to see how this one plays out!!Ruenoreply@blogger.com